Very good friends of mine have an interesting and intelligent teenage son, who we will call "J" for the time being.
"J" has two passions. One is to play video games the other, is the exact opposite, he loves to write poetry.
I have his permission to post one of his poems with the intention to get your honest feedback.
I know we have a lot of poetry writers out there, so feel free to critique. The not so savvy poetry person's comments are also welcome!
"J" and I will be awaiting your remarks.
Pawsitive thoughts,
Audie Kids and Pets community Enjoy!
Yes We Can
A picture never shown is never utilized
A picture defines an image
An image defines a voice
A voice never heard is never followed
Our voices are heard, but they never lead
Our voices made the decision
The Voice made our decision
The decision was made because of an image, not a vision
"J"