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Posted Feb 7, 2010 10:13 PM
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Hey Laura,

Thank you so much for your words of encouragement. I appreciate any and all comments. I do know that it is all good ..even if someone gives an opinion that may not be what I consider positive..or complimentary. Because in reality it helps me grow in my writing. The reason I find it difficult at times to share my poems..is only because they are so personal and I feel like they are like exposing my inner most thoughts and feelings for all to read and know.. And I also realize thats an ok thing and probably most people appreciate that but I sometimes like to only expose those deep feelings to those I feel closest with :) So with that being said.. I must tell you that I do have a private stock of poems haha that I only share with a select few.. But I am enjoying branching out and sharing little by little .. a poem here ...a poem there and YES.. it is an amazing feeling to have so much positive feedback..So I thank you my friend..from one poet to another..you go girl to!!!

One day I would love to publish a book of poems.. Just for self satisfaction haha To see it all in print haha.. Silly I know but I love the idea.

thanks again
Angeliis
Dear Donna,

I love your poem "Angel Poem" so much that I looked for more of your work. I'm so glad to have found this one too. It's GREAT!

I know what it's like to sometimes feel apprehensive when you ask someone to read and critique your work. It's understandable. At times I still feel that way and when I do, just before reading a comment or review, I tell myself that the feedback is an opportunity to learn and grow. When I feel apprehensive about it, I step back, take a deep breath, exhale, and only when I'm ready, I then proceed to read what others have to say. At least then I'm ready...good...bad...or indifferent...and there's always something to learn along the way.

Doesn't it feel soooo AMAZING and UPLIFTING when there's so much positive feedback and encouragement? You go Girl! You deserve it! :-x
(I love those little smiley faces with the flower...they remind me a lot of Radha's profile picture with the flower in her hair...fantastic...I love it)!

All the Best,
Laura
Thanks dreaming. I just didnt know what you meant by "miss girl" haha Glad you enjoyed the poem and thanks for the compliment.:)

Angeliis
Nice poem, Angeliis. Very creative. Very talented.
Hey Dreaming,

Not sure I fully undersrtand what you mean. "Miss girl? do my thing?
want to elaborate?

Angeliis
Okay, Miss girl. Do your thing. Big Smile, E
Hey Ladies,


I am just loving all these comments in regard to the poem..Its so much fun to come and see what you all think and how you feel and mostof all? Love those words of encouragement haha.. Just love it!!!!!! Hmmmm am thinking maybe I should post a poem a month, maybe every other week .. hmmmm have to give this some thought.. There may be an idea coming..I haven't realized it yet but .. maybe it will present itself:)

thanks again my friends
Have a great day and keep those comments coming!!!

Angeliis
Luv it ..keep them coming.
HI, Lisa, Bell and Lili,

Hey ladies your really making me feel like a successful poet haha I am so glad you enjoyed the poem I wrote for BraveHeartView Women.... I should have it printed up into a book marker. In fact I think I will...!!! Then I can have it myself to read every day haha.. It would also be exciting to see my name below it as my first "technically" published piece.

Thanks again ladies,
I enjoy all your comments and positive feedback
You girls are truly inspirational and I am excited to be part of your community.

Love
Angeliis
Ha! I love it. It made me smile as I read it. I also would like to print it - it reflects easily what we share through this forum.

I really appreciate this group of women - it is so very nice to be, just be, and receive support and appreciation... you said it as I'm beginning to see it is - and it is really just lovely

lili
Dearest Donna,

YOU Are A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!

Donna, I Love It... Your "BraveHeartView Poem" is truly Special... And, So Are YOU!!! :-x

We're so delighted to have YOU here with ALL of Us!!!

From my Heart to Yours,
Bell Rushing

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Donna,
I was so excited to see all the amazing comment ! You did it , good for you !
I really Love this I hope you don't mind if I print it out so I can read it daily.
Lisa C.
Thank you Radha, appreciate your positive thinking haha I am a nervous wreck sharing my poems haha But we shall see what the future holds:)

angeliis
Aloha Donna,
Great poem! Keep them coming girl! How inspirational. Together we will grow in clarity, Radha
HI Rebecca and Rijuta...

You guys are so kind with all those compliments I may not be able to help myself but share more poems haha

thanks gals!!!!!
You are really INSPIRATIONAL!!!!! :)
Way to go Donna!!!

Sounds as if you have been with us for years~ ~ ~

Don't be bashful. Let us in on your inspirations - often.

[You should be on our PR team.]
With love,
Rijuta
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