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Posted Jun 22, 2010 10:08 AM
Hey Ladies,

Ok...I am getting the feeling the poem didn't go over as hysterical or as funny as I thought it was...haha I thought I would have had a little feedback.. Like ahhhh a bunch of laughs haha Hope it didn't offend anyone..the intention was to share something funny. Maybe it would have been more appreciated if I stuck to inspirational poems but..I think laughter is a good thing..

Angeliis
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Hi Donna,
The most important thing is that you released your creativity and shared it here with us. Not everyone always writes about inspirational poems. Your poem was funny, sorry I had not commented sooner to you. We never know what is going to spark us to write and to "honor" ourselves and the talent or gift we have, we must write what comes to us.

Thank you for being bold and going for it!

Rebecca Hofeldt
http://ThePoetWithinCommunity.com
I'll send you an invite using messages that will have a button to click and we'll see if that works. B-)
Hey Caren

Thanks so much for the invite..and I would have loved to join your community...however..when I tried it said.." error and I was not permitted in that are " haha..

Maybe my poem got me into trouble haha..
btw ..thanks for the comment ..Appreciate it and I look forward to reading your poetry as well.

Angeliis
Angeliis...the poem was funny. I liked it! I was trying to think of a funny comment to leave but then got sidetracted with the business of life, funny how that is.

I was going to say "boys and their toys." I write but not poetry, but I want to, and have a keen appreciation for those who do.

I'll admit if I get only a few hits on a piece, I'm guilty of changing the title or doing a few edits. What can I say, we all want an audience.

I have an writing that I think would amuse you. It's called "Did God Take a Vacation Day?" I'll probably not post it here :) but maybe I'll email it to you.

I have a community here on BHW called LIVE YOUR DREAM. I'd love for you to join us.

Smiles,
Caren4u
LIVE YOUR DREAM
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