A Poem by "J"..... Your Comments are Welcome

Very good friends of mine have an interesting and intelligent teenage son, who we will call "J" for the time being.

"J" has two passions. One is to play video games the other, is the exact opposite, he loves to write poetry.

I have his permission to post one of his poems with the intention to get your honest feedback.

I know we have a lot of poetry writers out there, so feel free to critique. The not so savvy poetry person's comments are also welcome!

"J" and I will be awaiting your remarks.


Pawsitive thoughts,
Audie
Kids and Pets community

Enjoy!

Yes We Can


A picture never shown is never utilized

A picture defines an image

An image defines a voice

A voice never heard is never followed

Our voices are heard, but they never lead

Our voices made the decision

The Voice made our decision

The decision was made because of an image, not a vision

"J"