Love Is A Verb
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Thanks Anita and Chickee for taking the ride! I was attempting to put words on a long-time struggle with being told "I love you" so many times, yet, instead of it feeling enhancing and nurturing, I found that the feeling that was consistently created in my gut was constriction, tightness and a feeling of being trapped. I started playing with words. "I love you so much! I just want you to (fill in the blank). Then I would replace the sentence told to me with: "I OWN you so much! I just want you to (fill in the blank). I discovered that when I replaced the word love with the word own, the constricted, trapped feeling made perfect sense! This poem is my attempt at expressing that important awareness that allowed me to claim more ownership of my own life. Love it! Thanks for sharing! Clever rhyming and economy of expression, Susan.
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