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A Dream

Posted Dec 15, 2010 09:04 PM
In my dream last night I went fishing
It was in the well of good wishing
The pole was bent over from the weight of what I had caught
But to my surprise it was not what I thought

It was a rising star hung on the moon
All twisted in the lines with a fork and silver spoon

My dream tells a story of what life can be
When imagination is set free
Unleashing endless possibilities
When you follow your dreams then you too will see

Rebecca Hofeldt
http://ThePoetWithinCommunity.com
5 Comments
Very very nice storytelling! I really like your fork and a spoon, a thread of words I follow right to dining on the dream.

The editor in me wants to wonder if a word with little teeth like ...like 'catching' - fills out the story rather than 'unleashing.' Whatever. Can you believe the power of words to conjure pictures? It's wonderful!

Love, Cris
Love it!!! What beautiful images and possibilities I feel after reading this.
Thank you for sharing your creativity and for being here.
Risa:-x
ok, i like i like...
Simply Beautiful Becky!
Thanks for giving us a moment to unleash the possibilities!
What a gift!
Tari
Girl you are just getting more and more creative. I Love it!!!

Love Angeliis
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