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The Other Woman

Posted Jul 13, 2010 03:55 PM
Who is this woman who keeps looking at me?
She stares as if she can see right through me
At times she seems to know my every thought
At times she looks at me as if she is saddened by what she sees
Other times she seems so happy
Then there are times I see the same wrinkles upon her brow
The fine lines of time crossing around her eyes

Yet with all of this I wonder what she truly sees in me
What is she feeling and thinking while she mimics my every move?
What does my reflection think of me as I study her in the mirror?
Does she see the real me, or the person I perceive to be?
Is she all that she can be?
What does it take for me to be her and she to be the real me?
Who is this other woman looking at me?

Rebecca Hofeldt
http://ThePoetWithinCommunity.com
3 Comments
Miss Becky,

This is so powerful!
It truly describes that we as women have so many facets to our diamond....so many levels of our feminine energy.

You have amazing eyes to see and inspiring energy from your heart and soul.
Keep creating and sharing the beauty of you and the knowledge of your beautful insights.

In Gratitude for YOU...:-x
Linda Kay Holden
New Beginnings Community
Miss Rebecca,

It is so great to see you writing again!

The Other Woman got me thinking that this may be an insight of our inner self looking unto our outer self.....spirit vs mere mortal. Spirit always knows...it is our physical body that likes to take over and yet we are constantly reminded that this is not so.

Please write more....it is your inner voice shining though!
Looking so forward to seeing you at RISE!

Love your BH Sister,
Darlene
WOW ! That is Powerful !
Thank-you !

Eye Affirm ,
Lisa
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